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» Poem: Wake
Wake
written by ForsakenDream
04:13 PM 2/14/05
Twisted dreams that are alive in me,
Leaking thoughts inside of me.
I tried to tell myself this was all pretend,
But then I realized my dream will never end.
No difference between awake and asleep,
Your eyes are closed but you can still see.
Just a blur in time as we wait,
For our dreams to reveal what we hate.
No one to hear our crys,
No one to wipe our eyes.
A world of black and white,
Everything inside that we try to hide.

I tell myself its all pretend,
But I cant seem to ever wake again...


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» Comments / Feedback
by drK_drmR (2-14-2005 - 04:30 PM)
wow, really great imagery...awesome, really...loss for words here, and that doesn't happen often

by bloodydeath08 (2-14-2005 - 05:42 PM)
i dont really know what to say accept....wow

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