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» Poem: My Suicide Note
My Suicide Note
written by MorbidSuicide666
09:56 PM 4/24/04
So now when you look upon my motionless body,
I'll be more heartless than you ever were.
I hope you drown in your own guilt and pain,
Just like I drowned in my own blood.
So when im gone,
I know what they will say,
I was suicidal,
I was depressed,
I was way too weak for this world,
BULLSHIT.
If I was weak then why would I wanna die?
How many people can cut their arm down to the vein?
How many people can point a gun to themselves and pull the trigger?
How many people can take their last breath and never breathe again?
How many people can accept the fact that they dont deserve to live?


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» Comments / Feedback
by Tabryd (4-24-2004 - 10:00 PM)
::nods:: Very cool, and true.

by cufly2003@yahoo.com (4-27-2004 - 12:47 PM)
Too true too true!!!!!!

by (anonymous) (4-29-2004 - 12:57 PM)
i just want to say that you are the best writer that ive seen yet and you write stuff that so many people can relate to. man your fucking fantastic.

by CrackMonkey1212 (5-5-2004 - 12:50 AM)
god u r one of my fav writers on here i can relat to most of ur poems and i love riten poems i just cant make them dat good

by (anonymous) (5-13-2004 - 09:23 AM)
truly it is that it would take all the courage in you just to get your wrist cut down to the very vein of it! nyihihihi! don't you just love the sense of warm blood rushing out?

by otto_slave (5-16-2004 - 03:38 PM)
you are deep.it was grate;)and you are grate

by scared_alone (10-22-2004 - 07:31 AM)
this poem is wicked.wow.i can defintely relate to it!

by xmistakengracex (10-23-2004 - 12:18 AM)
i like it its wat kewl its like tru and ya its how i feel too

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