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» Poem: I'll let you no
I'll let you no
written by Bloodfilledcinnabuns
07:18 PM 2/14/05
for all the things i never knew
all the lies you cant undo
your love for me just isnt the same
all because of the pain
you left me there to cry alone
ill the love youll never show
im dying forever in my heart
but still loving you that was the best part
i see you there holding her hand
while i still dont understand
what went wrong and what went right
did it end because of that fight
you look at me then turn away
i miss the old days that all i have to say
the things you say you dont think twice
cause if you did you would know there not nice
you walk away the memorise run
remebering that it was so much fun
why did it have to end this way
its not alright but ill be okay
ill make it through and live it out
your so close but i still have to shout
take me away and give me another try
please dont let this be out goodbye
i cant live without you i just cant let go
ya i love and ill let you know
I love you


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» Comments / Feedback
by Dont_worry_i_bite (2-14-2005 - 07:21 PM)
i really like this poem beacuse it is true in so many ways usually the ones you love the most r the one farthest from u... good job*

by RozeyCakez16 (2-14-2005 - 07:23 PM)
i agree,very well done :)

by Bloodfilledcinnabuns (2-14-2005 - 07:24 PM)
Thanks and your so try on the love thing thanks alot

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