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» Poem: i Need to Know
i Need to Know
written by cuttie
04:24 AM 2/15/05
you say u love me
you say you care
but the thing is baby
i need you to show me
when we are alone i see it
but the second some one else is near
it seamse to disapeer
so baby just let it show
because i love you
and i need you
so don't be afriad to show me
just how much you care
i love you baby
because i know you do love me
i know thtat you are shy
but when ur friends come up to me
you seem to care more then
but i know u love me
that's not the problem
just show it a little more
and everything will just be fine
I love you baby


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let me know what u think thanx

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by KBryant (2-16-2005 - 05:05 AM)
That was pretty cool. Nice job, keep it up!

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