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Dieing inside (comment if you want)
written by demented_vampire10:06 PM 2/15/05I hide behind a smile,
yet no one knows how I feel.
These wounds are too deep,
to late to try to heal.
Dont try to help me,
you cant understand.
I scream so loud inside,
I feel as if I should just die.
I cant commit suicide.
I dont want my friends to live in my lie.
I scratch and scratch,
further in my skin,
so this pain wont get to me.
Its too late,
it already has.
Whats left but a corpse?
I cant go like i said.
What would my friends think if one day they found out I was dead? |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I love all my friends, thats why I wont leave you.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by hells_angel (2-15-2005 - 10:13 PM)
| i like it and its scary cuz you took my feelings and wrote them down. good job, check me out if you want. |
by babybunnystar (2-15-2005 - 10:50 PM)
| i wonder that all the time! its crazy, i always wonder if they would care! i havent killed myself cuz my mom. but man i feel like it! |
by cometomyfuneral (2-16-2005 - 06:54 AM)
| man, that was awesome. i liked it a lot! |
by farfromperfect110 (2-18-2005 - 09:55 PM)
| I think it is really awesome i read it and i was like wow they wrote exactly what i feel down on paper...keep writing |
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