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» Poem: Surrender
Surrender
written by DarkeningBeauty
03:29 PM 2/16/05
I can’t run anymore,
I am yours,
Take me home,
I surrender my love,
I have nothing left,
Though I try to forget,
You are all I am,
I surrender my love.
I fall at your knees,
I beg for forgiveness,
I still love you,
I surrender my love,
I am broken and dead,
Lifeless without you,
Give me strength,
To fight and carry on.

My life.
(Is controlled)
My heart.
(Is all yours)
My hope.
(Is for you)
My soul is no more.
My joy.
(Is defeated)
My smile.
(Died long ago)
My power.
(Is lifeless)
My love is for you.
You.
You.
I surrender.

I can’t cry anymore,
My tears have run dry,
My hopelessness,
Is all I am.
I am sorry, my love,
In all my truth,
I meant for you,
To care for me.
I don’t understand,
How you turn me down?
I can’t recognise,
The truth from the lies.
I no longer exist now,
I’ve given up,
I hope you sob,
Over my body.

My life.
(Is controlled)
My heart.
(Is all yours)
My hope.
(Is for you)
My soul is no more.
My joy.
(Is defeated)
My smile.
(Died long ago)
My power.
(Is lifeless)
My love is for you.
You.
You.
I surrender.

When the night falls on me,
You’ll lie down and think,
Barely conscious,
You will try.
I won’t regain my strength,
I won’t open my eyes,
I won’t come back home,
I surrendered.
This is not your fault,
I was cut too deep,
The scar remains,
Still it’s bleeding.
When you lied,
I cried,
I sacrificed myself,
So you understood.

My life.
(Is controlled)
My heart.
(Is all yours)
My hope.
(Is for you)
My soul is no more.
My joy.
(Is defeated)
My smile.
(Died long ago)
My power.
(Is lifeless)
My love is for you.
You.
You.
I surrender.

I surrendered to the night.
I surrendered to you.
I surrendered to myself.
I surrendered to death.
I surrendered to the dawn.
I surrendered to the dark.
I surrendered fear.
I surrendered to my heart.
I surrendered to the scream.
I surrendered.
But why didn’t you love me?
Why didn’t you cry?
Why didn’t try?


My life.
(Is controlled)
My heart.
(Is all yours)
My hope.
(Is for you)
My soul is no more.
My joy.
(Is defeated)
My smile.
(Died long ago)
My power.
(Is lifeless)
My love is for you.
You.
You.
I surrender.
I surrender.
I surrender.
I surrender.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
A very long song about a girl who has done something wrong to her boyfriend and is sorry, but the man does not forgive her. She kills herself so that the man understands that her should have forgiven her.

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