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» Poem: I miss you
I miss you
written by Bloodfilledcinnabuns
09:41 PM 2/16/05
You're gone and u left us all
I cant belive u did this none of us can
Why didnt u talk 2 us why didn't u express ur feelings
Why did u leave it all inside masking ur face with smiles and happy eyes
If u had just let one of us talk 2 u
Things might have been different
They tell me not 2 blame myself, but I cant help it
I keep saying if only if only
I kno I should'nt I kno it's ur decision but I just wish I could have stopped u
I kno ur at peace and ur happy where u are
U were a great person and u shouldn't have suffered inside alone
We all cared we just wish u knew how much
Dont worry it wont be long be4 we're all up there with u
And so now we're left with memories and images of ur face and ur voice and ur smile
Ur screename ur cell number I still have
I kno i should delete them there's really no need
U wont be back on but still I feel
If I just keep them than maybe u'll come back
But I guess ur not I guess ur really gone
I've accepted it I love u and I'll see u one day


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This is to my best friend Ashlee she killed herself on Aug 22 2004
R.I.P.
we all miss you

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» Comments / Feedback
by Wobble (2-16-2005 - 09:45 PM)
oh my god.................that was soo emotional i felt ur pain...

by Bloodfilledcinnabuns (2-16-2005 - 09:48 PM)
Thanks

by (guest) (2-19-2005 - 07:04 PM)
i never lost a good freind. i can tell this is about somebody that is very important to you. your partner in crime???

by Bloodfilledcinnabuns (2-22-2005 - 08:03 AM)
Ya my Ashlee i love her

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