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Beutiful Soul
written by Bloodfilledcinnabuns09:54 PM 2/16/05Beutiful Soul
She makes her reasons ryme
her rymes all have reasons
yet she stands behind a different time
and dresses for imaganary seasons
you may not like her ways
you may not understand her thoughts
her intracate mind, it strays
yet her words are caught
she trapped them to a page
her life is what she told
although her story remains in a cage
no one grasped the rittles she sold
therefore she is only one
all alone she walks the path
love she accepts from living, none
she is strong yet afaid of their rath
compassion she can't remeber
she resides by a faint hope
hope that the one will mend her
she works to find reasons to cope
she belives in one way only
the face she has never seen
someone loves her spite she's homely
she lays not on a border nor inbetween
she knows who she is and is not
she never ment any harm
her faith, down it is shot
yet she still relys on a strong arm
life has been bad* since she was born
she fights the walls that never fall
feels no hate though her life is torn
home she will go though the ringing call
her example
her mind
her soul
her beutiful soul |
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Tell me how you feel about this one **thanks**
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Tanasa_bg (2-16-2005 - 10:19 PM)
| Dude, what can I say about this... See it is very good, but some stuff sucks. If u can change few strange places, it will be great. |
by cuttie (2-19-2005 - 04:38 AM)
| i think u are good at writing poems
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by (guest) (2-19-2005 - 06:58 PM)
| .....i hope you go somewhere in life with your poems because thier good...really good! |
by Bloodfilledcinnabuns (2-22-2005 - 08:00 AM)
| Thanks you guys your awsome thanks alot |
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