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Eternity
written by Tanasa_bg10:34 PM 2/16/05Eternity, drop da pain
upon my head.
Cursed my flesh, decain it.
My fuckin' soul is forever trapped in hell!
My master tormenting my soul
but i enjoy 'n don't wanna go away!
I finally find my home,
I find da place to spend da eternity!
DA world is fallin' down
after so many years of glory
'n he's there-
my master, my future, our eternity!! |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by alymonkey123 (2-16-2005 - 11:10 PM)
| i dont mean to be mean but the poem makes you seem like you worship the devil or something, if that was what you were going for tho then its ok |
by The Black Halo (3-12-2005 - 01:47 PM)
| Proper english, please. Using profane language in a 'poem' does not make you look big or hard, so keep the idiocy away from this portal. |
by gouldies_wee_sister (4-5-2005 - 10:09 PM)
| Ethereia SHUT THE FUK UP !! she poem rocked !! lovin yer work ! |
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