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I need you (comment)
written by demented_vampire11:21 PM 2/16/05Please dont walk away,
I need you so much today.
I know I went the wrong way,
please take me with you.
If you leave,
I dont know what I will do.
I went to you because I knew you cared for me,
to seek what was wrong with me.
I know I caused you pain.
I'll stand in the rain,
so you cant see my tears.
Ive lost the battle,
I cant run.
Its too late,
my fears have won. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by FIRE heart (2-16-2005 - 11:27 PM)
its good a little EMO but good, ill be there for you if you need it u2u me |
by demonbaby09 (2-16-2005 - 11:33 PM)
by xXshatteredXx (2-16-2005 - 11:47 PM)
thats beautiful...i cried |
by demented_vampire (2-21-2005 - 05:28 PM)
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