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» Poem: Set me free
Set me free
written by demented_vampire
11:27 PM 2/16/05
She was abused,
she is confused.
She wonders what lies inside,
and if she can hide from her lies.
She cant take much more,
she starts to think she's a whore.
She hate's everything,
but its not like anyone's listening.
She doesnt liked to be questioned,
she's already in depression.
She's doesnt want to commit suicide,
she wants to try to fix the sad look in her eyes.
Guess what,
that girl is me.
Dont worry,
unless you want to set me free.


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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (2-18-2005 - 03:13 PM)
I loved it...it sounds like how I view myself.

by xX_sAd_LoVe_Xx (2-19-2005 - 03:55 AM)
i swear ur poems sound like me.... that is just how i feel... :( well..that was good too l8ter _SAM_

by xX_sAd_LoVe_Xx (2-19-2005 - 03:56 AM)
i swear ur poems sound like me.... that is just how i feel... :( well..that was good too l8ter _SAM_

by (guest) (4-5-2005 - 11:14 PM)
We're alike. Rach

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