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Strong(comments plz)
written by brokenxsmile11:28 PM 2/16/05You tell me not to give up
But I can't keep trying to live up
To everyone's expectations
My heart's covered in abrasions
I've been keeping it away from you
It's locked away behind my lips
But as we grow closer, it tries to break free
It gets closer with every kiss
I know you think I'm happy
So why do I cry every night?
Maybe this is why I always
Start all those pointless fights
You don't seem to see the truth
But it's been there all along
I know I come off as being stable
But emotionally, I'm not very strong |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by LostInDarkness (2-16-2005 - 11:38 PM)
| wow thats such an awesome poem. i can totally identify with it, it's as if you captured everything i wanted to say but couldn't. keep up the good work! |
by (guest) (2-16-2005 - 11:43 PM)
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