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Summer Skies(plz comment)
written by sk8rchik01:35 AM 2/17/05I remember one night
many summers ago
when u took my hand and said
"theres sumthin u gotta know."
As u took me away ur eyes had glistened
when we were finally alone
you spoke and i listened.
"I dont know how to explain it,
and i'm not sure how to start.
I just hope u understand
you have a special place in my heart"
Then you told me ur feelings
and how u've always felt,
towards me and all my actions
under the stars as we knelt.
When u stopped we gazed at the skies
then u took my hand and shut ur eyes.
U started to come in closer to my face
when i figured out what u were doing
my heart had started to race.
Then ur lips touched mine,
below us the wet grass,
above us the stars shine.
In that 10 seconds
all i felt was total bliss
as our lips were against each other
and i experienced my first kiss. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this has not happened but i'm hoping my first kiss is as wonderful as i think it will be......plz comment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by AngelAshes (2-17-2005 - 01:51 AM)
by (guest) (2-17-2005 - 03:15 AM)
| wow your good....keep it up... |
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