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» Poem: Broken life. (Homicide, Suicide. )
Broken life. (Homicide, Suicide. )
written by Misery
05:21 AM 7/14/04
He sits alone
in the back row
holding a black rose

he's here to see her for the very last time
he says he won't cry
and asks why did she have to die

her life was taken away
and now it's hard for him to live another day
his mind seems to turn into a haze

She was the thing that mattered most in his life
she was the one that was going to be his wife
and it was all taken away by a knife

he looks into her coffin, she's just as pale as she was the day they met
he remember the connection they felt
when she'd smile inside he'd melt

but now he feels to sad
and the anger boils inside making him mad
and now he's going to get the one, that lad

the lad the man who took all his happiness away
there's nothing anyone can say
finding this man is the only thing that will make him live another day

his thoughs race, he places the rose in her lifeless hands, and kiss the lips of the dead
and places his hand on her head
I'll get the man who took this life from you he said

as he walked out of the funeral service, and to his car
his friends wouldn't let him get to far
but they couldn't stop him and he continued on, he was going to kill the man that took away his shining star

days on he looked days on he searched
the murders went on
and innocents died

but three months since the tragic event took place
he found these men that took away his soon to be bride's smiling face
never would there be another murder case

not for these two at least
he seemed to turn into a beast
on one these two men did he feast

and when all was said and done
he turned him self in, and as the police arrived he left a note that confessed it all, and that the time was fun and he swung from the rafters hung
but in the end he returned to the one he loved...


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by Trapezium (7-14-2004 - 10:55 AM)
That's an excellent poem... it really touches me... keep up the good work

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