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the break down
written by bloodydevildrinker66611:29 PM 2/18/05sick of life
sick of ppl
sick of the world
your hppy
your sad
your scared
in your room
in your thoughts
all day, all nite
your lost
your confused
dont no wats goin ot hppen
then it hppens
your in a mental hospital
constintly druged
your lost
your confused
you had a break down |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by painfull-secrets (2-18-2005 - 11:31 PM)
| I love your poems, they're really good..
but they'd be better if you'd write not like : ppl, constntly..
i'm sry, just a comment,
but keep writing ;) |
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