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Memories (please comment)
written by demented_vampire08:00 PM 2/19/05I never wanted to let you go,
but I felt that you had a right to know.
I rip apart the pictures we took,
all thats left is an unwritten book.
You were my first kiss,
I told you I would always remember this.
My little black broken heart,
is now broken apart.
I swore to the razor,
I wouldnt let your nails of faith be pushed through
my veins.
I burn the memories of you and me,
but I still will always remember us.
You didn't put up a big fuss.
We will always be remembered,
even though we were severed. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
People ask me why I write stuff like this. I say because I write what I feel, and this is what comes out of me.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by demented_vampire (2-19-2005 - 08:09 PM)
| i know all my poems are kinda like this but, everyone of them have a different meaning. |
by hotLAbunny (2-19-2005 - 08:14 PM)
| Same with me. Poerty is all I have left in my life. It's a way to express what you feel and no one can say anything or do anything about it. I respect what you said and I hope you keep writing. Later |
by Genocide Reaper (2-19-2005 - 08:15 PM)
| Its a good poem. No shit. |
by demented_vampire (2-20-2005 - 12:15 AM)
| thanks. i have alot of other poems too |
by Dark_Romance_Nikki (2-21-2005 - 07:34 PM)
| Writing what you feel is the best kind of writing, full of raw emotion, and its a wonderful poem. |
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