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Alone
written by gohtic_freak_rock_gurl08:31 PM 2/19/05She walks for miles and miles
Seeing nothing ahead
She thought to herself
She must be dead
As she looked around she saw
Nothing but black and white
Then wondered if everything
Would be alright
Now forever she must walk
In her despare
And wonder if anyone else
Is out there |
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( tell me what u think im open to conments) this is my first peom i ever wrote
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| » Comments / Feedback | by shaunnas_donna_143 (2-20-2005 - 01:45 PM)
by cuttie (3-15-2005 - 05:41 PM)
| i would have t say that i love ur poem |
by blurredvisions (3-15-2005 - 09:28 PM)
| awesome girl!!!! i loved it. all of your poems are super hot. they all ROCK ...just remember what i said about suicide... |
by gohtic_freak_rock_gurl (3-16-2005 - 09:40 PM)
| thanx for all the comments it helps to know some ppl like or love my work ..... i wont about the suicide to many promise i haven't broke one yet so im not going to start now |
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