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Disappointment
written by gohtic_freak_rock_gurl08:43 PM 2/19/05As I sit in a cold, dark, lonely cornor
In what some would call self pity
I think of all I have disappointed in my life
MY family and friends
The thought of suicide comes to mind
How i long for that razor blade
TO take it and run it along the main vein
But I promised myself
And so many others I wouldn't dare
For I'm not one to break a promise
So I'm stuck in this life of pity and disappoitment
With no way out but death in which I must wait for
But do not pity me I have enough for my self
So don't worry I'll be fine I always am
So I leave my little cornor
Only to return tomorrow..... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
any conments ....... i'll be happy(well im never happy but u know what i mean) to hear what u think ... i made my self laugh. lol dont ask
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| » Comments / Feedback | by shaunnas_donna_143 (2-20-2005 - 01:43 PM)
| im the same way with a promise and at one time i wanted to just die but it will get better u just have to wait it will come and death is never the way out death is just a way to run and hide everything always gets worse before it gets better but it was a great poem |
by (guest) (3-5-2005 - 12:19 PM)
| I love your poem. And I definitely like your user name. Do you really mean what you wrote? About comitting suicide? I hope you don't mean it. I know sometimes life can be hard and some people say that it sucks, but life is short. We should appreciate it . |
by gohtic_freak_rock_gurl (3-15-2005 - 05:43 PM)
| yea i met every word i said i dont tell lie if you where as broken and in as much pain as i am suicide looks good |
by cuttie (3-15-2005 - 05:45 PM)
| things will get beter soon they usualy do i go through that every now adn then and sooner or later things do get better great poem! |
by blurredvisions (3-15-2005 - 09:26 PM)
| suicides not the answer. its for wussies. don't ever do it. i almost lost my life and my sisters. please, just take my word. it gets better... slowly. |
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