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Jealousy
written by gohtic_freak_rock_gurl08:54 PM 2/19/05As I look around
I see people
Coupling up
Holding hands
Holding one another
Kissing
Spending time with the one they love
I sit there watching in jealousy
Why can't that be me
Why can't I finf that special someone
And why can't they find me
So we can hold hands, cuddle, and be in love
As I sit there in my jealousy
I wonder in there some thing wrong with me? |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
not my best but i was kinda out of it so forgive me wait y do i care what u think ........any conments made my self laugh again lol dont ask
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Blackhawk (2-19-2005 - 11:40 PM)
| I know how that can feel and you captured the true feeling to people who have never felt that way before. I commend you for this poem. |
by I_Hate_Your_Eyes (2-20-2005 - 01:36 AM)
| hmm.. i can relate to that poem so well.... |
by shaunnas_donna_143 (2-20-2005 - 01:37 PM)
| i was like this poems wrights at one time then i found someone and so will u just give it time cher up and smile |
by Blackhawk (3-9-2005 - 10:44 PM)
| The girl who made the comment above me one thing: Prove love exists and I know you can't. No one can. It's all an evil lie. |
by gohtic_freak_rock_gurl (4-3-2005 - 08:58 AM)
| so very true love is nothing but a evil lie and a misused stupid word!!!!! |
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