» Poem: Hear my heart tear |
Hear my heart tear
written by wiltedrose03:44 AM 2/20/05A heart that wasn't built to last
A mind that can't forget the past
These eyes that have seen what most have not
A soul that misses you a lot
A tear that fell not out of pain
A spirit that will never tame
The lonliness that longs for a friend
But it wouldn't happen in the end
Because theres no one to notice, no one to care
If you listen closely,you can hear my heart tear |
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» Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (2-20-2005 - 04:49 PM)
wow...i think tht was brilliant x |
by Dark_Flame (2-27-2005 - 03:40 AM)
by Forever Cursed (3-1-2005 - 12:48 PM)
I really liked this poem, it's really touching and has a depth to it that goes beyond the surface and brings back many memories for me. |
by AthiestAnarchist (3-3-2005 - 01:22 AM)
I liked it so much....really good.
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