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my wish (plz comment)
written by teejavus10:38 AM 2/20/05i wish that i had not seen her
i wish that she wasnt there
i wish that the world was much bigger
i wish that i didnt met her
i wish that i had never talked to her
i wish that i never had loved her
i wish that my wish comes true
thats all i wish
thats all i wish |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Lastfull_Endings (2-20-2005 - 10:57 AM)
| Love and Regret man, its cold harsh, and just like a girl i know. I feel ur pain |
by (guest) (2-20-2005 - 12:24 PM)
by (guest) (2-20-2005 - 01:33 PM)
| now ur one guy whose totally in love |
by potty_dark_wiccan (2-20-2005 - 02:15 PM)
| I know just how it feels... |
by (guest) (2-20-2005 - 02:17 PM)
| dear there is life ahead too. yeh nahin toh koi aur sahi koi aur nahi toh koi aur sahi.at this age if u r so frustrated then wat will happen in future.all ur poems r depressin. for a change write an optimistic poem.hope u dont mind but its a frank opinion |
by teejavus (2-20-2005 - 05:03 PM)
by teejavus (2-20-2005 - 05:04 PM)
| lookin for a new one now, any1 interested
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by PaIN_oF_paYMeNt (2-20-2005 - 05:09 PM)
| you dont realyy wish you didnt meet her face it you wish she never left |
by (guest) (2-21-2005 - 04:12 AM)
by stroke18213 (2-21-2005 - 05:54 AM)
| life is just like that
and makes u regret alot
just think of the possitive
and try to move on...i know its hard but try!!!!=/ |
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