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» Poem: The One I Loved
The One I Loved
written by nicole_lyndon
10:46 AM 2/20/05
There was a guy, a guy of incredible looks,
To get him to notice me, all i had is what it took.
I must say i don't have much,
Nice body, great looks & such.
But after some years of trying,
I still sit here alone and crying.
I felt i had grown a little closer to the one i loved,
But still i felt nothing but his push & shove.
He will never know, for him, what i feel,
But i act like nothing is to come of this to keep it real.
And as i write this poem to you, I feel nothing but used.
Now to you, the one who gives me his push & shove,
You are still the one i love.


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by gothic_freak355 (2-20-2005 - 04:45 PM)
hey! this is a great peom. you have some pretty good potential!

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