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Silent obsession...
written by GeNoCiDaL_nInJa05:19 PM 2/20/05You are.....
My crush......
My king....
My true
Everything.....
My smile...
My tear..
My one
only fear...
My crazy
OBSESSION...
My cure for
DEPRESSION...
You are....
On my mind
When I'm awake...
In my dreams
When I sleep...
Making my heart ache...
Making my legs.....Weak...
You are..
The reason I smile..
The reason I cry..
The reason I live..
The reason I won't die..
I love you.
I want you.
I need you
With me...
So keep me
Hold me.
And never...EVER...
.....Leave....
You are....
My love....
You are..
Him..
You are....
My silent obsession...... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
A sappy as hell love poem I wrote about this guy... He's become my best friend.. And lately.. we've started to become more than friends.....
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xxxvampire_loverxxx (2-20-2005 - 05:30 PM)
| OMG I LOVE IT! i used to secretly love this guy that i didn't really know. the first time i saw him i loved him. we've been going out for almost 4 months and he still makes me weak. every minute without him is another moment i'm not alive. i love ur poem, great job! |
by ForeverUnseen (2-20-2005 - 05:56 PM)
| damn that's really good! Good job ^_^ |
by shredded_kitty (2-20-2005 - 06:04 PM)
| like ur poem its so true xkittyx |
by boom_boom13 (2-21-2005 - 01:05 AM)
| well, I think it was a good kind of sappy! lol, i LOVED it. great job! |
by baby_blue_brunette (2-21-2005 - 08:54 AM)
| omg!!! u got skills!!!!! it is sooooo true!!!! i feel that way bout someone! |
by Blue_Eyes (2-25-2005 - 07:53 PM)
| Hmmmm, well, I can relate to that! *Should I have admitted that?*
Its brilliant, loving it all the way! |
by scribble_girl (2-26-2005 - 05:21 PM)
| i LOVE it - i feel that every day |
by shadow_watcher (2-26-2005 - 06:58 PM)
| wow! Pretty damn amazing! I know the feeling (as does almost everyone) you spoke it so true, so well! I wish you luck w/ your guy and your poetry. *peace, love, and empathy* Lindy |
by Tainted_Soul_777 (2-27-2005 - 03:11 AM)
| Dude, I feel that way bout my boyfriend and weve been going out for 7 months! I wish u well with him....O god I love that feeling and i hate it at the same time.....i know exactly how u feel cause i want him so bad right now......AHHHH good luck |
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