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Concrete Angel
written by twistedmind3311:16 PM 2/20/05She dances before their eyes
The angel, smiling with glee
Looking carefree
But it’s all a lie
So much pain and worry
Has finally taken its toll
The concrete angel falls
Into the depths of despair
Her skin cracks
Into a gray mass of nothingness
Showing no emotion
Only pain
She finally proved herself human
But the time was wrong
Her human self
Only brought her death |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I don't think this is quite done, but I'll still post it.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by ForeverUnseen (2-20-2005 - 11:19 PM)
| it's a kindof cliffhanger ending, it rocks! |
by bluepixiebaby (2-20-2005 - 11:30 PM)
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