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» Poem: Spiderweb
Spiderweb
written by crypticx
02:04 AM 2/21/05
Wake up from the nightmare,
on my way to hell;
waiting for my savior,
he's not coming;
i can tell.

Back to the place called 'home',
inside my room i dwell;
Talk with the voices in my head,
and pretend i'm doing well.

Lay down in the silence,
wait for it to end;
Watch every minute go by,
as it starts over again.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
if you have the time, could you please comment? im just trying to get some other opinions on my poems. thanks.

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» Comments / Feedback
by lickalama (2-21-2005 - 02:09 AM)
fukin A dude fukin A!!!!!!!!i luv it

by xTroubledAngelxo (2-21-2005 - 04:06 AM)
Awsum. Luv teh poem.

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