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Delirious; please comment?
written by crypticx02:09 AM 2/21/05Awaking from the nightmare all alone,
thoughts of what used to be still in my mind;
i look around to see that noones home,
still searching for the love i cannot find.
A broken melody is in the air,
it's haunting prescence won't seem to leave me;
listen to the tune of doom and despair,
alone i seem to break why can't you see?
This life is killing me on the inside,
why can't i get out of this depression?
lately all i want to do is just hide,
guess 'tis time for more counseling sessions.
and once again i can go back to sleep,
stuck with the broken promise i must keep... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
well, i wrote this for my english class, i think it sucks, but could you give me your opinion? Thanks.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by DutifulAngel (2-21-2005 - 02:15 AM)
| it doesnt suck, its good. but we all think that our own poems suck |
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