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» Poem: Dear God (controversial)
Dear God (controversial)
written by DontFearAConcequence
03:29 AM 2/21/05
Dear God
who would let their people die
sit back and relax while they cry
who would let them suffer in torture and pain
doing so with nothing to gain
who would create diseases in infect the innocent
and do whatever possible to keep them content
who would, in their right mind, let their people go hungry
and do nothing when they beg or plead
expect them to believe in times of great depression
a man without a purpose or profession
whoever can do this, I cannot respect
the many lives this person has wrecked
this guy they say can cure the blind
truth in this matter, I’m yet to find
so I wrote you this letter to see what you think
and I sign it from myself in this ink
goodbye to you, always, from me
the non-persuadable Stay-C

P.S. to help you find the one of which I speak, here’s a clue
The one who I talk about..its..its you…


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i know some of you arent going to like it...but thats okay..whats a poem without controversy?

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» Comments / Feedback
by thebrokenone (2-21-2005 - 03:38 AM)
that's awesome. purely awesome.

by kizzyle (2-21-2005 - 04:06 AM)
thats is one of the best poems ive ever read is so real its what people think but wont say its awsome

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