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» Poem: You don't know me.
You don't know me.
written by .purity.
07:52 PM 2/21/05
You don't even know me
though you know what i said
i wish you wish to show me
show me that it's still dead

You don't even know me
though you know what i said
i wish you wish to show me
show me that it's still dead

there nothing left to give
so take it all and forgive
what i am
crawling from god's can
like he ever gave a shit..
but that's it cos..

You don't even know me
though you know what i said
i wish you wish to show me
show me that it's still dead

give me it..
all of it..
take it all..
let me live..

give me it (give me it..)
all of it.. (all of it)
take it all (take it all..)
let me LIVE (let me.. LIVE)

let me live to see me die
pick me up, to let me fall
let me live to tell me why
give me it, so take it ALL

You don't even know me
though you know what i said
i wish you wish to show me
show me that it's still dead

(stronger)
You don't even know me
though you know what i said
i wish you wish to show me
show me that it's still...

(said)
..dead..


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
a song.... umm.. yup.

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by .purity. (2-21-2005 - 07:54 PM)
wow. poems get frames these days... :o

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