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Not A Cutter's Poem
written by First2Last11:53 PM 2/21/05People make up Gods and believe in after life
if youre a mormon, you've got at least one wife
hippocrits in every sense
but oppinions are too dense
men hold power, i wonder why
women should be thin and shy
in the world U.S. is best
but what about Canada or all the rest?
Oh, No, wait, theyre not the best
Fuck them all theyre communist
the gov't is worried about appearances
Afriad of what "they" think
who the hell is "they"? its like theyre scared to fuckin blink
Thinking we need the answers to every fucking question
making rules, not suggestions
making crimes and starting wars
refusing sex from half the whores
making bad things good, making good things not
legalizing ciggarettes but never smoking pot
skimpy clothes and baggy pants
saving trees but killing ants
telling dirty jokes, singing dirrty songs
one of them's acceptable, yet the other one is wrong
old people are driving blind
the world spins fast so never mind
so interested in gossip and famous people's lives
not afraid of taking plunges, just scared o
f taking dives
fashion, clothes, the coolest stores
politics are such a bore
bush won that election, not al gore
and monica was such a whore
vh1, mtv
where's the people that really sing?
fixing cats and saving dogs
killing birds and squishing frogs
crazy jews and all their cash
amsterdam has got their hash
fancy phones and technology
gynocologist and proctology
spilling oil everywhere
all you see is blonde hair
fake breasts and silicone
happy gays and homophobes
diet foods and low carbs
all the models throw up or starve
society today, the meaning of life
which one's wrong or which one's right?
people's beliefs or the law?
which is better, pop or ska?
casual sex spreads disease
and people plead with god "oh please oh please!"
herpes is spreading everywhere
and people act like they dont care
average people by the day
but by time its night, porns the way!
robbing banks and liquor stores
passing out on the floor
and littering the ocean shores
fighting just to get their way
so let them marry if theyre gay
People are whats wrong with society today |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I get really sick of everyone titling their poems about cutting and suicide and seeing screennames and what not ALL abuot how the person is a fucking cutter. i myself am a fucking cutter and i dont usually share it with the rest of the world. its nice youre fucked up in the head enough to inflict pain upon yourself, but there ARE other forms of selfmutilation. not saying you need to learn them, but its annoying constantly seeing, especially in the poetry section. i have written and posted poems about cutting but the title doesnt talk about cutting... and love poems get annoying too. "you left me i cry and wonder why" stupid whiny emo shit. im also emo, but sometimes kids, you've gotta break out of that fence.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Orelinde (2-21-2005 - 11:57 PM)
| I understand what you mean about breaking out of emo and all this cutting stuff. I've never written a poem about cutting (then again, I'm not a cutter) but I'm getting tired of all the poems about that act of self-mutilation. They could at least find a metaphore for it, or something... Well I liked this poem very much it talks about life and what's going on in the world. |
by First2Last (2-22-2005 - 12:01 AM)
| hey thanks. glad someone else feels the same about the cutting/selfmutilation thing. poetry is supposed to be a form of art, so talk about it (if you must) in an abstract way of thinking.. GET CREATIVE!!! |
by Orelinde (2-22-2005 - 12:42 AM)
| lol. Exactly!!! I even posted a "guide" that I was allowed to barrow from another site into the Poetry forum, I don't think many people have looked at it, and those that have haven't said whether or not it inspired them to write differently... or was even informative. |
by Bloody Tears (2-22-2005 - 01:04 AM)
| your a hipicrite and a poser!people put their poems on here to share or get other peoples oppinoin so if you dont like it dont come here! |
by First2Last (2-23-2005 - 03:11 AM)
| hippocrit. so what. you only got so deffensive probly cuz ur one of the fuckin cutters that write about that shit. i never said to stop, but lay off a bit. poems entitled MY SUICIDE, THE LAST CUT, AS I CRY are getting OLD. if people want honest feed back and opinions about their writing, well heres mine!!! THEY SUCK MOST OF THE TIME and the forced rhymes get annoying. |
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