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» Poem: Slut
Slut
written by lifelessangel
12:13 AM 2/22/05
I pick up the blade,
I start to cut,
It's all because of one pathetic slut.

You act so nice so caring,
But that isn't you, your vindictive and evil,
You just want what I have.

I had everything until you came along,
But you had to change all that,
You wanted me to be as lonely as you.

Now your the happy one,
Look how your treating me,
To you I dont exist.

I'm sad and wanting to die,
But you don't realise,
I've always felt like this.

You've made me worse,
I hate you, just remember what I'm like,
Trust, you don't need all this.

I'm afraid to say,
It's comming your way,
Your a murderer.

You drove me to my suicide.


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» Comments / Feedback
by crimsonpathways (2-22-2005 - 12:17 AM)
Hey. I like the writing, vocabulary and such. Just remember, if a guy is driving you to cut, he's not worth your time. Males should not be depended upon, they, unless caring, are unimportant. Nice job love, -Crimson

by (guest) (2-23-2005 - 12:01 AM)
Hi Ash here, i know who that is about and i still like that, well keep them coming :)

by depressed_lil_angel (2-25-2005 - 06:46 PM)
great fucking poem xanda! it's nice to know that i'm a pathetic slut! but i'd appreciate it if next time you said it all to my face! i love you too you heartless fucking bitch! i'm sorry that everyone hates you it's not my fault people can see the real you it's not my fault that your not the centre of attention anymore! i don't understand how you can blame me for everything! u fucked up little brat! luv bex

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