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Down too low~tell me what you think~
written by Bloodfilledcinnabuns08:21 AM 2/22/05I'm making circles in my room,
No one is coming by.
I carry on and just assume
That love has turned to lies.
Air is suffocating me,
Here there is no window.
And I am sure that they'd agree
The sky is down too low.
What is real seems far away,
I'll wait across this line.
But boarders will all go astray,
They'll never come in time.
I don't know why I listen,
I don't hear what demons say.
The sounds of hate all deafen;
They'll never go away.
I'm making circles in my room,
I don't care where I go.
I'm sick of all your damning gloom
And the sky is down too low. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by mishy0077 (2-22-2005 - 08:32 AM)
by Bloodfilledcinnabuns (2-22-2005 - 10:20 AM)
by whothehellcaresnewayz (2-23-2005 - 06:53 PM)
| my love is not a lie....i love you! |
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