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» Poem: Fakes
Fakes
written by Bloodfilledcinnabuns
10:36 AM 2/22/05
The world will keep going,
even if I stop.
I feel so used,
like a bucket and mop.

Friendship is nothing
when you have no true friends.
People use me,
I guess that's just how it ends.

Time will never stop.
The world will always go.
My friends are never true,
don't they feel low?

There is a twelfth button
on the elevator now,
they better be sad,
'cuz they're going down.


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» Comments / Feedback
by death_becomes_her (2-22-2005 - 11:04 AM)
thats a really kool poem

by kayos (2-22-2005 - 04:22 PM)
im feelin that...i like it

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