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My sweet lullaby(please comment)
written by mychemromance06:54 PM 2/22/05My sweet lullaby
Sending me into madness
Traping me and making me cry
Till I'm lost in my own darkness
This life is not my own.
This act I didn't write.
My fingers soaked with the blood not shown
From the pain I didn't fight.
You people try to change me.
Every tormenting day.
Some day you all will see,
And listen to the things I say.
When you're bleeding from my knife,
You will beg for mercy and give me back my life. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by E (2-22-2005 - 06:55 PM)
by babybunnystar (2-22-2005 - 07:46 PM)
| wow, it was good, the top half was very straight, the ending was kinda left, but it was good! i really like it. |
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