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You'll never know (comment)
written by DarkeningBeauty07:05 PM 2/22/05I've been watching you,
Dreaming of it to be,
Forever you and me,
Even though,
You don't know me.
Through the dark and the good,
I've been there for you,
Silently comforted,
But you can't tell,
You don't know me.
'From yours truly'
But who can this be?
Please be my destiny,
Fate decides,
If you will know me.
Days, turn to weeks, turn to years,
Still I've only glimpsed,
The one I'm giving my life to,
Yet still,
You don't know me.
How am I supposed to know,
If you're in love,
Through the thread bare trees,
Now I know,
You can't know me.
You'll never speak the name,
Of the one that watched you every day,
I thought it was inevitable,
But no,
You'll never know me. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I'm writing so many poems like this. Please comment.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by MentalPyroChick (2-22-2005 - 07:15 PM)
| I like it thats really good |
by E (2-22-2005 - 07:18 PM)
| I was like that for a while, writing really helps. Good poem by the way. |
by Blackhawk (2-22-2005 - 07:28 PM)
| Excellent, breathtaking, extravagent. One of the best I've read. |
by babybunnystar (2-22-2005 - 07:40 PM)
| this is really good, its how i feel about my best friend. really good. |
by witcher (2-22-2005 - 08:45 PM)
| I...understand you...because I'm broken too...my friends don't know the half of it...am I real? |
by hells_fuzzy (2-24-2005 - 12:39 AM)
| omg thats soo good i know how that feelz |
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