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Perfection In Tragedy.
written by Josh_x10:02 AM 2/23/05I can feel your blood
Trickling down my arms
The feeling is so perfect
I love the way you’re just running out of life
Holding you in my arms
Never felt so good
Death goes so perfectly with lust
I loosen your grip on the knife
Gently taking it out of your hands
Running the blade down my wrist
Pushing down hard
‘Til I see the blood pouring
I suck the blood from your wrist and suck the blood from mine
Pressing our lips together
The taste is so perfect
Parting my lips
The feeling of your tongue
I feel your fingers tangling into my hair
I run my fingers all over your body
Savoring all of you
I never want this to end
But we loved together
Now we shall die together
Breaking the kiss
I lay your head on my chest
Wrapping my arms around you
It feels so right to die like this |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Its sappy.. Its strange.. But i fucking love it.
-Josh.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by sheded_tears (2-23-2005 - 10:13 AM)
| hi... i just love ur poems they are really beautiful. they remind me of a person. may i ask u a ?... if so u2u me |
by teenagedeathgirl (2-23-2005 - 02:46 PM)
by kayos (2-23-2005 - 03:06 PM)
| damn...thats got some romeo-and-juliet-like romance goin on... |
by silverstar (2-23-2005 - 03:50 PM)
| hey thats one fucked up poem.....but i like it its cool!! |
by crimsoninsane (2-23-2005 - 03:56 PM)
| That is probably one of the best poems I have read in a long fucking time. dont stop writing, I love your work. |
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