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» Poem: So Fucking Fake.
So Fucking Fake.
written by Josh_x
10:17 AM 2/23/05
Looking into the mirror
Everything seems so real
Looking closer
I see that I am hiding
Behind the eyeliner
Behind the piercings
Remove all that shit
Then there is me
Just a boy
Hiding from himself
Hiding from being normal
Trying so hard to stand out
I guess it works
But was that really what I wanted
I don’t know
I close my eyes
Remembering the old me
Remembering my smile
Where has it gone?
Before I know it
The mirror has smashed
I look at my fists
Covered in blood
I pick up a shard
Dragging it along my wrists
Beautiful crimson red blood
My only release
Somebody help me
Help me be free
Nothing seems to work
I sink down to the floor
Burying my head in my hands
Sobs shaking over my body
Watching my blood trickling to the ground
I'm a fake.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Gah >.< Stupid Poem. I apoligise for it's shittyness.

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» Comments / Feedback
by painfull-secrets (2-23-2005 - 01:15 PM)
waw.. quiet.. this is really nice!

by xangelbumx (2-23-2005 - 04:46 PM)
it aint stupid, its good!

by _acceptable_loss_ (2-25-2005 - 02:31 PM)
it's a very good poem . . .defintaly not shity

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