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hate
written by lone-poet06:49 PM 2/23/05Hate curses through me
Clouding what I see
Muffling what I hear
Not showing any fear |
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COMMENT....and send me ure own poetry .. i just wanna learn :'(
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (2-23-2005 - 09:43 PM)
| You want to learn? Its more than rhymes and rythem. Though, that has a lot to do with it. First, you need a meaning, and a feeling. Get specifict. Pick your target, aim, and fire. |
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