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Fire at dawn smoke at dusk
written by lone-poet09:13 PM 2/23/05As the fire burns through the house
Flames violently licking lost souls
The sky shows no sorrow
Even as smoke drifts towards it
The smell of death in its wake |
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plz look at all my poetry
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| » Comments / Feedback | by neverhappy1184 (2-24-2005 - 11:56 PM)
| thats a really good poem short sweet to the point i love it
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