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A girl w/ broken dreams(comments please?
written by yOur_bloOdy_vAlenTine01:07 AM 2/24/05maybe if you looked a little closer
past my smile..
youd actually see the real me...
a girl with broken dreams..
and a girl with crying eyes |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
depressed rite now an jus rote it..tell me what ya think
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (2-24-2005 - 01:47 AM)
| i think your poen is good!!!! :o) |
by (guest) (2-24-2005 - 01:47 AM)
| i think your poen is good!!!! :o) |
by neverhappy1184 (2-25-2005 - 12:07 AM)
| i love this poem its short its meaningful and it gets str8 to the point!!
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by dyingday (3-19-2005 - 09:29 PM)
| I like this poem and it speaks to me |
by xBloodyblckRose13x (4-2-2005 - 05:05 PM)
| this poem is really good....keep up the good work.... |
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