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Not a cutter's poem- so comment cutters
written by First2Last07:02 AM 2/24/05People make up Gods and believe in after life
if youre a mormon, you've got at least one wife
hippocrits in every sense
but oppinions are too dense
men hold power, i wonder why
women should be thin and shy
in the world U.S. is best
but what about Canada or all the rest?
Oh, No, wait, theyre not the best
Fuck them all theyre communist
the gov't is worried about appearances
Afriad of what "they" think
who the hell is "they"? its like theyre scared to fuckin blink
Thinking we need the answers to every fucking question
making rules, not suggestions
making crimes and starting wars
refusing sex from half the whores
making bad things good, making good things not
legalizing ciggarettes but never smoking pot
skimpy clothes and baggy pants
saving trees but killing ants
telling dirty jokes, singing dirrty songs
one of them's acceptable, yet the other one is wrong
old people are driving blind
the world spins fast so never mind
so interested in gossip and famous people's lives
not afraid of taking plunges, just scared of taking dives
fashion, clothes, the coolest stores
politics are such a bore
bush won that election, not al gore
and monica was such a whore
vh1, mtv
where's the people that really sing?
fixing cats and saving dogs
killing birds and squishing frogs
crazy jews and all their cash
amsterdam has got their hash
fancy phones and technology
gynocologist and proctology
spilling oil everywhere
all you see is blonde hair
fake breasts and silicone
happy gays and homophobes
diet foods and low carbs
all the models throw up or starve
society today, the meaning of life
which one's wrong or which one's right?
people's beliefs or the law?
which is better, pop or ska?
casual sex spreads disease
and people plead with god "oh please oh please!"
herpes is spreading everywhere
and people act like they dont care
average people by the day
but by time its night, porns the way!
robbing banks and liquor stores
passing out on the floor
and littering the ocean shores
fighting just to get their way
so let them marry if theyre gay
People are whats wrong with society today |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
not to make fun of the selfmutilators (since i am one) but this is the 2nd time im posting this just for the sake of doing so... titling poems and sn's about ur cutting issues/problems. i understand u would like to share your art or poetry but do you really need to make it obvious youre a cutter? there's always metaphors ya know... STILL NO OFFENSE. just a nice critizm sorry if you hate me. comment on whatever
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Flirtin_Wiv_Suicide (2-24-2005 - 02:05 PM)
| That poem made me laugh, It was so well written and flows really well, It painted a picture in my head of someone sttod on a tall building shouting this out lol brilliant. Anyway - what you said in your foot note about cutters. I am one, I post my poems about them up because it is comforting to know there are people out there that know what your going through and know where your coming from, its not about exposing yourselfs as cutters its about being excepted somewhere where other people know the same torment. I know people can relate to them aswell, Knowing that other people do relate to them and that they know they are not alone, makes me feel kinda good. Anyway enough of my rambling lol GREAT POEM |
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