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» Poem: Helpless Attempts.
Helpless Attempts.
written by Josh_x
11:12 AM 2/24/05
You only wanted me there to bring you a smile
When noone else would
I'd tell you i love you
But the smile soon fades
Tears soon begin to form
My smile fades too
Why can't you let yourself be happy
Just this once
You make me feel so helpless
So fucking weak
No matter how many hugs i give
The smiles always gone
Please bring it back
It makes me so happy to see that smile
The tears make me want to die
I will never tell you though
I do not want to bring on more of your crys
You know i'm the only one who helped you through your pain
But you still rely on me to bring you all your happiness
I cannot take it anymore
I can't even make myself smile
Dragging the razor down my wrists
Stopping just to think of that warm smile of yours
I press down hard
Causing blood to pour onto the bathroom floor
Falling to the ground
I doubt i even made a sound
A single tear rolls down my face
Please don't forget me
Please let yourself smile
My visions blurring
My thoughts are fading
Goodbye my friend
My love
My life.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Tis About A Good Friend'a Mine.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Ruined_Hopes (2-24-2005 - 11:45 AM)
kooool poem.

by Satensdaughter (2-26-2005 - 02:47 PM)
what a good poem, it sort of decribes me and one of my good mates. to tell you the truth his name his josh, he all ways makes me smile, but we aint spoke for a while, and i miss him alot. i need him.

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