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when god called you home*comment*
written by sweetiepie89
05:10 AM 2/25/05
god looked around his garden and found an empty place
he then looked down upon his earth and aw your loving face

he put his arms around you and lifted you to rest
his garden must ne beautiful, he always takes the best
he knew that you were suffering, he knew you were in pain
and knew that you would never get well on earth again
he saw your path was diificult, he closed your tired eyes
he wishpered to you "Peace be Thine" and gave you wings to fly
when we saw you sleeping so calm and free of pain
we would not wish you back to earth to suffer once agian
you've left us precious memories, your love will be our guide
you live on through your friends, your always by our side
it broke my heart to lose you, but you did not go alone
for apart of me went with you on the day god called you home


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is for my boyfriend who was n a car accident...i was there with him...but he died slowly as i live the reast of my life wisking that day never happened...it hurts so bad to know he's gone and that i am living here on this earth today....but i will always love him and he will forever have apart of my heart

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by xxbloodyristxx (2-25-2005 - 05:52 AM)
thats awsome..im srry to hear about ur boyfriend...good poem though

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