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Suicide*comment*
written by sweetiepie8905:26 AM 2/25/05i grab the knife
i slit my wrists
i feel the blood pouring out
i feel im begining to get light headed
i see the sheets of my bed coevered in blood
i feel like im dying slowly
but i feel no pain
the only pain i feel is that of my brother standing
in the door way crying becuase he sees his sister dying....
the tears roll down his face...as he runs to my side...and then i realized that i need help because i see how much he is hurting....and he is the only reason why i am still here to this day.... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by 1x2x4xGET (2-25-2005 - 05:31 AM)
| I really like it. Powerful finish |
by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (2-25-2005 - 05:43 AM)
by Jess_Is_Cool (2-25-2005 - 06:06 AM)
| family has such an impact. i know, or else i wouldn't be here either. veyr nice |
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