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Love is like the water cycle
written by Trapezium02:42 PM 7/16/04As we got closer we drifted apart,
I'm now in your mind instead of your heart,
You went right and i went wrong,
This is why i'm writing you this song,
We meandered down the long river,
Everynow and then getting a shiver,
Then we reached the estuary,
It has split us apart and took you from me,
I don't want you anymore just leave me alone,
Get rid of this knife take away my phone,
Give me back part of my life and leave,
You're gone from me now why don't you believe?
You stayed in the sea and i evaporated,
Sucked into my thoughts and precipitated,
Blown straight out into the cruel coldness,
Killing me the repitition just like oldness,
Don't come to my house ever again,
Don't repeat the words and fill me with pain,
Don't make me cry over what you do,
Don't make me die just for you,
You're not the one that means that much,
Replace the memories of your hand on my crutch,
If you die i'll spit on your grave,
Treat you like a bitch or a dirty slave,
I thought i didn't deserve you but,
I've realised it's the other way round my mind is shut,
To any poison you may try to feed,
Go away get rid of your greed.
Everything so far can be symbolised by water,
The tears and the fuse that are slowly getting shorter,
Now can you understand what i want and can't get?
Can you understand why i love every death threat? |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This is to my ex girlfreind... just recently she wont leave me alone... today she came to my house and wrapped my hand around a knife handle... she told me how much i wasn't worth and then told me to go and die... i nearly did... Thankyou Cassie... you saved my life
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (7-16-2004 - 03:03 PM)
| AWESOME....i like your poem. i totally understand it...i have an ex boyfriend who wouldn't leave me anlone and thought that i was a slut and said i didn't deserve to be happy so every time i found a new boyfriend he found a way to break us up......i have been so broken up and twisted inside...but what can you do..............
Name= Angelkisses20407@aol |
by Psycho_Penguin (7-16-2004 - 06:50 PM)
| I'm crushing on the one guy that broke my heart into a thousand pieces... That is awesome!!! It sounds like it could be written for him! |
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