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Atonement(plz comment)
written by brokenxsmile
06:29 PM 2/25/05
Take all these memories
Cast them into the sea.
I’ll take the things that have happened to you
And I will hold you till it’s through
All this pain you’ve felt inside
Put it all on me till the day you die

Understand me, this unfinished tone
It’s ringing in my ears, and becomes my own song
I can feel the wind, It’s blowing against my face
Then the rain soaks it through and washes it away

I have scars and I have marks
covering this broken heart
They eat away, cause great pains
And do nothing and make a change
This is why I’ve done you wrong
But sad excuses can’t get me far
I’ll Find atonement and find relief
And take these burdens away from me

And I have done nothing, to show that I’ve tried
To trust in you and listen to what you hide
I just want to know, the way that you feel
So I can know if this effort is real

What goes on behind those eyes
That I am searching so hard to find
The thoughts and feelings that you have
I guess this makes me feel this sad
Look at the way that we have grown
I guess that’s why I feel so alone

Understand me, this unfinished tone
It’s ringing in my ears, and becomes my own song
I can feel the wind, It’s blowing against my face
Then the rain soaks it through and washes it away

Take all these Memories
And cast them into the sea
Put all of this pain on me
Because beside you is where I’ll be
It took so long to achieve
The trust you had in me
Now I have come to believe
That you are the one that saved me


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