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The Sound of Your Voice
written by psychojuggalette04:37 AM 2/26/05My dreams never cames true.
All I wanted was to be with you.
The sound of your voice,
it numbs me.
The feeling of your soft lips on my naked body.
The warmth of your body.
The sound of your voice.
The feel of your touch.
I wish I could stay like this forever.
I don't want to let go.
I can't,
you set me free.
The sound of your voice.
Let me know I'm free. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by LoveSex&Rock (2-27-2005 - 05:06 PM)
wow what a great poem. ur a really good writer. i think so at least, and i know exactly what u mean in ur poem. unlike some people's poem who make no sense |
by AthiestAnarchist (2-27-2005 - 07:30 PM)
That was cool... I liked it. It sounds like you've got a lot of true feelings and arn't just writing about shit just to write about it. Good job! |
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