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She (comment)
written by DarkeningBeauty03:08 PM 2/26/05She couldn't stop going under,
She couldn't look into his eyes,
She couldn't go outside without him,
Yet she could not stay inside.
She couldn't sleep at night without him,
She couldn't even close her eyes,
Scared and unwilling was she, with him,
She kept all her feelings inside.
She couldn't go kill herself all alone,
But with company she wanted to die.
She wouldn't be able to live life,
With nobody there by her side.
She couldn't take it anymore,
Drew blood from her own very sword,
Lay down, fell into darkness,
She was ready to die. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by dancingrooster08 (2-26-2005 - 03:17 PM)
| Man, that's sad. It's good writing, too. I like it.
erika. |
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