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bloody rose**plz comment**
written by sweetiepie8904:06 PM 2/26/05i tried to forget about you
but i couldnt
i tried to throw away all the memories of the times we shared
but i couldnt
i stand here alone
my heart cast into the darkness
slowly being engulfed as you walk away from me
the rose...
i got you a rose
its welting, dying, fading
i have nothing left...
take the torn of the rose and slit my wrists
blood trickles down unto the rose
my life for its
Silent Death... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by twzeentch (2-26-2005 - 04:17 PM)
| that was touching with the end yet surprising bloody rose waht a truly amzing peom there are many other rats in the trenches so don''t stop looking |
by scribble_girl (2-26-2005 - 04:17 PM)
by Xxmyself-painxX (2-26-2005 - 05:22 PM)
| blood on a rose unique i like it keep writing like this and youll be @ the top! |
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