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written by sweetiepie8904:16 PM 2/26/05The blood in these veins
has long ran cold
glistening daggers all so old
still sharp as tacks at their points
can her hear the screams?
the pain is growing.....
inside im dieing
while my soul is crying
to make them all happy
i know that im lieing
i cant fool myself
i cant fool myself
i cant fool myself
Rage builds on the inside
heaven forgive me
for i have lied....
i wont be alrite
i think i’ll die
i wont be ok
oh god im chokeing
inside im dieing
while my soul is crying
to make them all happy
i know that im lieing
i cant fool myself
i cant fool myself
i cant fool myself
this is it my moment of fame
a man to young
drivein insane
the razor pressed flush against the vein
the feel familer cool cold metal
helps calms the man his thoughts will settle
and all is over with a slip of a hand
now in darkness good bye man....
inside im dieing
while my soul is crying
to make them all happy
i know that im lieing
i cant fool myself
i cant fool myself
i cant fool myself
decisions made far to rash
thoughts to controll
I couldnt last
my mind is breaking
but its all to fast
i dont know exactly how long ill last
but....
inside im dieing
while my soul is crying
to make them all happy
i know that im lieing
i cant fool myself
i cant fool myself
i cant fool myself
Here i sit at the end of it all
waiting watching for etrnitys call
the destiny i used to belive in
is far to busy massivly deciveing
to make my aquantance this dark day
i look at my life
pissed it all away
shadows turning
twist with desire
the darkest rapture
is a burning fire
I cant....
ice lingers on the horizon
fool
my eyes fail as i am risin
my self
i cant go on
all to dark
to far gone
i know i wont last
its been to long
im failing inside
too late ive died
your too late
too late----e
to save me-----e
NEVER AGAIN.......
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| » Comments / Feedback | by burningup_inside (2-26-2005 - 04:18 PM)
| it's really good but ur sn is sweetiepie yet you rite about such morbid things |
by anjel-of-darkness13 (2-26-2005 - 04:52 PM)
| Very nice, I like it. But it kind of doesn't go with your sn... |
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