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If I
written by Choking_Away_Life05:58 PM 2/26/05If I told you,
that I love you,
would you run away in fear?
If I whispered,
"I love you"
would you even care?
If I cried,
running to you for help,
would you hold me until i stopped?
If I died,
would you tell me,
"Secretly, I loved you too." |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by burningup_inside (2-26-2005 - 06:08 PM)
| y would it be secretly otherwise gj |
by Choking_Away_Life (2-27-2005 - 07:32 AM)
| secretly because he never said how he felt...ha i dunno it made sense to me obviously... |
by (guest) (3-23-2005 - 02:16 AM)
| i think it makes sence.. its really good |
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